本帖最后由 eliteman 于 2011-1-11 16:04 编辑
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实在看不下去了,指出你的几个错误:
1、“家禽生长机制和体格组成的内在微小变化”在这里应该是和谁有关联?
“associated with…”这部分是谁的定语?
你看看下面的图解:
2、genetic makeup是“基因组成”的意思吗? “基因组成”好像和“遗传结构”不是一个概念吧。
3、你把perceived changes翻译成"感官变化",你自己知道啥意思吗?你自己那关你能过吗? 其实,“perceived changes in...”这类表达法在学术论文里经常出现,给你几个例子(以下是几篇论文的题目):
a) Teachers' perceived changes in practices and students' learning as a result of implementing teacher action research
b) Perceived changes associated with autogenic training for anxiety: a grounded theory study.
c) How do I sound to me? Perceived changes in communication in Parkinson's disease
d) The Impact of the Prospective Payment System: Perceived Changes in the Nature of Practice and Clinical Education
4、"in responding to..."翻译成“应付”?手下留情吧。
5、“supposedly“体现到哪里去了,你觉得不用翻译出来吗?
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